It has been a while since I updated my teaching blog. This semester I’m rather frustrated for not getting a class at the Cyber Lingua Lab. Every semester, I use the lab as I like to integrate the activities in class using the facilities at the lab. Unfortunately, I do not have the opportunity to do so. However, although it has been a month, I finally get a lab session every Wednesday night as our class session.
While I’m writing this, all of you are supposed to reflect on what you have learned so far. I’m going to ask you to post it in your blog after this. This might be the first time you ever created a blog.
Today is also the submission of your outline for your term paper, which is 10 % of your total score.I’ve looked through at the outline and these are some of the general comments:
1. Some of you did not do sentence outline as required.
2. Grammatical errors occur and I assume obviously you are not making full use of the grammar and spell check available.
a. Subject verb agreement
b. Tenses
c. No articles
3. Sentences are too long and unclear.
4. Sentences are incomplete. Some sentences without a verb.
5. Words are not appropriate. They sound like direct translation from Malay.
6. Ideas are not well developed.
Don’t despair though! This is just the beginning. You have ample time to improve your writing in your first draft later on.
Before that, I wish you a good mid-term break as this is our last class for this week. Don’t forget to look at Chapter 1, 2 and 3 of Writing Academic English and work on it during the break. It will help you a lot in writing term paper.
Till we meet again!
42 comments:
i make mistake in my online..so sad :(
farhana what we had done to our out line...haish!!
I'm afraid you are not the winner since you have not created your English blog. Post your entry now.
huhu,,,i will improve madam..
just for you and because of you i'll do my very best..haha.lol
am i the winner??
let me be the winner ^_^
nooo...im the winner,you are the loser...hahah
loserrr.....you are the loserr....haha
nahhhhh..
i dnt think so cuz u aint the winner!
madam i make new blog for bel...lalalla~
madammmm...pick me as the winnerrr/////not that loserr..
outline...outlioe...
whatever..
im so sure that u're not the winner..
lalalaa~
plzz dont cry zyla..haha..
lets sing!!
im the champion!!
yeayyyyy...
may i make a new outline madam...?
pn syima, i afraid uyou give me a low mark...sad
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mark??
OMG!!
y so soon?huhuuu
aiya...
i'm toooooooo late...:(
puan......
what have we done with my outline!!!!!!
am i too late madam??:)
i'm tying to an A for bel...
:)
i afraid i will get bad result this sem...huhu..
tq teach me to create blog..hehe..
owh no, i'm late...
hello madam!
ooppsss...
wrong spelling...
ngeee:)
puan...
:-(
may i do new outline?
madam,..
go go girl!!
VIRGIN!! :P
i'm also the winner la.. :p
farhana...where are you?
i'm sleepy...
finally, i have done my blog. huhuhu,....
stop fighting u two...
hahaha lol...
i hope i can improve my english...
;p i hope so....
hmm..thanks madam..im just finish the sequel of my blog....take a look...hehe...have a great holiday madam...
lols...
tats ok,i'll do my best..
^_^
madam!!
i miss u...
Salam,
WE are hosting a symposium on asia pac lits and cultures.Harap you and those interested will join us as participants (speakers semua dah ada...by invitation sebab semua top notch scholars/writers/poets.Ini simposium tahun ke 26!I had attended two and memang fun!)
http://asiatic.iiu.edu.my/asiapac2009/index.htm
im finally done my blog..haha..
very very very late!!!!!!!!!
i hope u'll get well soon madam..
hye Pn.Shima..
still remember me??
it is being a long time i did not open my english blog..
and i decided to write again... and for your info,i've also created my malay blog this month and i hope you can give comments and opinion on my writing...
this is ny malay blog..
www.nanaluv8875.blogspot.com
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